Got any suggestions or questions or comments on School Days?

P.S. This is my smilly I encourage you other guys to declare your own Smilly

Okay, my idea for a School Days comic is as follows:
Scene:Count Alan and Eternal Trev are walking on the P.E. field.

Eternal Trev points out various objects on the ground and keeps saying "Watch out"

The objects start with some soda, then some gum, and some weird mess.

Count Alan then says angrily " I have eyes! I'm pretty sure i know where I'm going. While he is saying that, you see "Squish"

Then, you see Count Alan stepping in some toxic waste and saying "Please dont tell me i just stepped in something"

Eternal Trev then says "Yup."

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You know I found a typo in Episode 4 when Eternal Trev says you send us 999.99 and we'll send you a" than next frame "A free Turky" you said A twice. Not that I want to patronize you or anything...

By and By do you happen to know when I will get that Symbol showin I am a Burnt Toast Knight??? Just Curious.

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**** your good I hoped no one would notice that

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"Yay!" Xanthor, Roleplaying 4 Ever! Episode 1, Pannel 8.

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I think you should bring...um to protect privacy B*****n into the comic as a giant

Type Horrible random Video-game trivia demon

A little late there-

uh don't worry of Turky Man he's cool

-I already did his name is Brendan the Giant, Giant, just he hasn't come in yet.

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