Great on Bane 10 :p (I'm on the right forum right?)

But... many problems I've (and others) may have noticed...

- You switch from first-person to third-person consistently...

- We already know about your spelling error dilemna... :p Get someone to proof read it! Parents, friends, me :P

- Paragraphing, and how to place them...

I like gore :) <.<

Sadly enough, my story isn't even finished the first part. And it's at 11 000+ words. (55k Characters approx) By the time it's finished... it'll probably elipse your Bane series in one go. (It'll take months )

Just some things for you (and others) to think about.

Battlenet ID: Look up there.

Ah, thanks for reading. I'm aware of the major problems Bane has had with spelling and grammar in the first season, and I'm working to correct this, but have you read the episodes from the newest season?

Battlenet ID: deadfast

How did you find this site? This is my site!